i need some help. any points or things i should focus on in either the resume objective or the coverletter would help.

srs. thanks.


Resume Objective:

To advance my career as a coach to the next level. By using my ethics and values instilled into me beginning at the high school, and continuing as a player at the collegiate level and then as a coach in high school, use my talents of game management, analytical skills, and player motivation to add strengths to a coaching staff. (I KNOW IT SUCKS. I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT TO WRITE)

cover letter:

Dear Head Coach:

The resume attached is submitted for your review. I am seeking a challenging position as an assistant coach at the collegiate level and I would like the opportunity to speak to you. My current coaching and past player experiences have required dedication, team/game/self management, and the ability to communicate effectively with players, coaches, and other members of the waterbasket weaving community.

My personality is to strive for excellence in any task I undertake. As a member of successful athletic careers dating back to high school, I have taken the opportunities given to me to grow professionaly and personally. It is my goal to be a valued, contributing member of a staff and to create positive motivation in the development of the student athlete.

I welcome the challenge of bringing my experience and fresh ideas to a fantastic organization. I look forward to speaking with you to discuss the opportunities available within your staff and how I feel I can add in scouting, recruitment, and analyzing players.

Respectfully submitted,

AWOT Icznhazchezburger

Teenchat: ALL TIME GRAND CHAMPION!1one!

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